Friday, April 06, 2007

PAge 10



And so it ends.

Here's where the story definitely needed some space. I wish I had a little bigger page count to come up with a more clever ending than an explosion. That said, I have no idea what that more "clever" ending would be. Sometimes, the kids just want an explosion.

I also am not sure that it's clear that Jump is using the explosion to close the portal, not necessarily destroy the giant beast on the other side.

Well that's it. Until the next Jump Cannon story... see ya later. I might post some of my ridiculously tight thumbnails for this story next week. Maybe I'll explain why they were so damn tight too.

6 comments:

MIKE THOMAS said...

Bravo!
That actually felt like a full episode even if you didnt get to add as much as you wanted, still, great comic. More!

MIKE THOMAS said...

Also, i liked the settle down line, as if his fist is nurturing. :D

Uloo said...

Pleased to see this again, John. I think your reservations about the piece are valid. Still, this is fun stuff.

Meetch said...

Awesome work man. Just discovered you today. Can't wait to dive in. You'll definitely be getting some linkage from my blog.

Nice!

M!

Monkeyfeather said...

Thanks Mike, Jonathan, and Meetch.

Thanks for adding me as a link Meetch. I need to set up some links myself some day...

Jamie Baker said...

Wow... I haven't been to your blog for a while and now there are all these great comics pages. Have you found somewhere to publish it? Like Flight or Heavy Metal?