Wednesday, April 04, 2007

Page 8

Here's where things start to fall apart for the story. I'm running out of pages, and still lots to do. I think I could have benefited from a few more panels in this section to help set the mood more, as well as build up to what Krueger is up to. I think I could have played up the VZA's surrounding Jump more, hopefully building some more tension into this section, but I was running out of space.

I do still like the idea of using a big pile of brains to open a portal though.


Blair Kitchen said...

These are great John. Zombie/ Vampires, with a monkey guy with a human brain. That's all the perfect ingredients. I'm enjoying them! It's a shame it didn't see print. (It's not too late though).

Monkeyfeather said...

Hey Blair! Thanks for checking out the comic! I was hoping I'd get to meet you at APE this year, but it looks like I'm not going to be able to make it this year. You're right, I think it's pretty hard to go wrong with monkeys and brains.